It's not bad
For a Madness submission, it lacked some pretty key points. Such as the violence, but I'm guessing that's coming in the next ones xP
But, you did a good job with the animation and I see the effort you put into it. I actually do wanna see the story now =]
I dont finish my work yet. You have to to wait some time... Anyway you can visit my account for the "news". I will be put there images from the movie :)
no really...
I get what you're doing here. But why the madness character? I think it's untallented to use these kind of figures and especially when you're making these kind of video's, you had to make a more sinister kind of touch to it. A little more dark, little more broken. When you're making a video with your emotions, you've got to put all your emotions in the video. And some more story, a little longer would help too of course.
I have a idea, how to relate dark, bloody madness with my story :)
Lol
Madness? THIS IS SPARTA!!!
yeah, you have right. My madness will be more than killing people :P
Mmmm...
Of course, it wasn't THAT bad, but there's much room for improvement. Example: work on your perspective. The elevator doesn't fit the scene because it's not drawn in the same perspective as the rest.
Improve, improve...
Its only a trailer. In main movie I will IMPROVE all details.
Great!
It' seem to have a grat sstory, with so much feeling, it's nice.
A 9 'cause, well you told it, the animation isn't perfect. But is good affter all, keep working on it!
Yea, the animation is sux but the story will be better :D