Awesome
im getting straight to the point.
not too impressed with the animation,very typical anime style.however, you ve managed to deliver an intimate connection between the animation and the viewers .Not many in newgrounds are able to do that and for that i salute you.
And by the way,if i wasnt mistaken that was an indonesian song.Im from malaysia and i can say that most of your translations was correct,well at least we get what the song was trying to say.so ya,dont worry about the "bad english".