Well...
ill give you a 6 stars for animation,no real story more like a situation that most users can relate to (good job) because no one on ng likes original stuff with the exception of water lolies or w/e its called now.i would of given you more due to the simple fact that the animation was really good but the "art" killed it for me.just practice on your drawings a little more but dont overdo it because then you take away from other things that make this flash have great potential :D