Ten years?
Pretty late than never I suppose. The animation itself was funny, not to mention it would have been pretty lame if they did that sweater gag. Thank you for your originality at least!
Reviews for "CoyoteVille - Episode .5"
Draconis777 responds:
Long story...regardless, I plan on doing a few more. :D
awesome
love coyotes, and old cartoon gags. Nice twist. :D
Draconis777 responds:
W00t! Thanks!
Unexpectedly good
I can only wonder why you didn't begin animating this sooner. Your animating, while still rough in places, is refreshing. The acting is also great. And while I could guess the ending, the preparation and delivery were so creative that I laughed anyway. About the only things I can criticize are the sound effects (although I know you're going for the cartoon feel, the sounds are still a bit grating).
I look forward to your next submission, whether it be an extension of this or something different.
Draconis777 responds:
It's a long sordid tale which I won't bore you with, but animation is something I've wanted to do all my life but I've had a few challenges, both mental and psychological to overcome to get to a place where I can actually start doing the things I love. Regardless, I'm now getting serious about it and will work on improving for future submissions.
Animation is a tad off...
The drawings themselves are good, but the animation is, well, not so good. Fix that, and it is pretty awesome.
Draconis777 responds:
Yeah, It's really choppy. I'll work on that...
Haha
Good and unpredictable joke, nice art. But the animation could have been better.
You seem to have some of the art knowledge necessary to animate but not enough experience with animating.
You should read some of the tutorials on anipedia (google it) and then search for elements of animation. If you need even more help with all this, I'd suggest you getting the book "The Animators Survival Kit" where the creator of "Who framed Roger Rabbit" explains the elements more throughout.
Hope that helps!
Draconis777 responds:
Thanks for the constructive critiques! I actually have that book (and videos) and it's helped immensely! I was able to do a decent walkcycle after practicing some of the stuff. I still have problems with being choppy but I figure that will go away with time and practice. There's also another book called "Animation Crash Course" that I've been going through and it's really good.