No.
Listen, your flash needs A LOT of work. It's fine and up to par for a beginner but PLEASE try to increase your skills.
The sound was very very bad.
The story was badly written and it seemed like you were grasping for jokes.
You really need to work on your animation skills because without that you'll keep making eyesores like these.
All in all I'm giving you a one for effort (even though it only took you 2 days) you seem like you really want to get into flash so keep practicing and I'll be looking forward to seeing your next projects after you progress.