well, I'm actually pleasantly surprised...
While it wasn't perfect, it was FAR better than most first time submissions, so kudos on that... The animation was fairly decent, nothing a little practice won't improve ^^. The sound quality could use some improvement too, but I suppose you only used what you had to work with, so no need to beat you up about that, lol. I noticed your art style is somewhat reminiscent of Samurai Jack, it had an overall Samurai Jack feel to it really. So keep at it buddy, I look forward to what else you may throw this way.