Hahaha
Hahaha, yea i get it;) Ok, i really laughed, that's a +. Tho the animation and the audio could be improved. But as they say, practice makes perfect, or something xD. I think you should continue animating and i'm sure one day i'll laugh my ass of when watching your masterpieces.
Cya GL
ME
Woah! Thank you vm ;D
If there was only 50% of ppl watching this thinking the same... ^^
Yeah I'll be working hard!
well
the animation was a bit decent one problem was the mouth animation and the drawing was decent to cold use a bit of improvement and the humor was o.k good luck next time.
Thats strange coz the mouths were my top1 urgence on this flash XD
Nice...
That was nice but kinda boring.
I liked the idea and the dialogue was nice and kinda funny but it was very dry.
Next time try making a dialogue from human vocies and not by 'Text to speach'.
6/10 3/5. Try better next time.
I'll try to fix this emptyness problem next time !
Thanks for taking time to review !
not that entertaining
dialog was kind-of funny but you know ............ you should of put subtitles and that was really short but....honestly with a plot like that how could it not be
You're right, subtitles would have helped a lot.
In fact if this movie is short it is because I wanted to put my best and see what people was thinking of it, and on what I must work for next time.
Very little animation, not very good as a whole
Here's the compiled list of issues I have with this animation:
MS Sam voice
Simplistic/Not very good looking graphics (i.e. the people)
The picture on the wall could've been traced (there's a sprite tutorial in the NG Flash section which can teach you to trace bitmaps and remove the white bits)
Hardly any actual animation besides a bit of motion tweening and lip-syncing.
Some parts with bad grammar which makes it hard to understand (like "how did you call me?")
So basically, you can obviously draw a person to some extent, and made a decent background (simple yet somewhat effective, I hope you drew it yourself). There wasn't a ton of background noise (I'm not sure how MS Sam works if you record it and put it into a flash, but despite me not liking the voice, it was alright).
So work on actually animating something, try to make sure all the grammar is at least understandable, work on your drawings a bit, maybe try to voice act yourself or get someone else to, and... learn to trace bitmaps I guess.
Overall it was almost decent, I guess. You're not bad though =)
Well... thanks for this review, I'll follow your wise advices !
Anyway... damn I worked so hard to be sure the grammar were understandable lol