pretty good for a first flash
I thought the concept was pretty amusing but the only peeve is the grammar.
pretty good for a first flash
I thought the concept was pretty amusing but the only peeve is the grammar.
Nice but..
o loled your animation it`s nice u have to make less repetitive , its ok
i will rate 8 =)
a message for XelrogTApocalypse:
send an animation first instead being an asshole
Thanks and for all the haters in newgrounds please mind your own buisness if you have nothing good to say About this vid then dont say anything at all
Ok, here
Ok dude, I know this is your first flash. I seen a few problems you gotta put in a loader man you can find one here at downloads. You are tracing the bitmaps wrong. remember 1 and 1 pixels, few corners. Also XelrogTApocalypse is actually just hating on you. Why? Because he runs a sprite site and believes every sprite flash he see's is Crap. Don't take the reviews to heart man I sucked, I'm not the best but getting there takes time. I hope to see you keep trying.
Thanks for the advice hope you'll like the rest of the series
Righteo.
Repeating voice effects gets annoying. If I hear Peach go "HAAAAAAAAUH" one more time I might just cry.
Use proper punctuation when it comes to titles, try a loader bar so we're prepared for the animation and in the future... a little more animation and a little less talking.
Ok for a first timer
It's not bad for a first timer and there are some good jokes but I'm not boosting your score just for that. I'm not even sticking around for the next part I'm sorry keep trying though you have potential.