Nice.
Always good to see some effort put into a early animation! If you haven't figured out onion skins yet, they are always nice. I'm also all for ditching plain white back grounds whenever possible. Keep up the good work!
Reviews for "Found flash"
indesisive responds:
Thank you for the positive feed back :D
It was pretty damned good
keep working at it, but from what I see here you can draw.
If you want to learn more maybe get yourself a copy of The Animators Survival Guide, by Richard Williams.
indesisive responds:
Aaah cool ill look into it. Thank you for the review
Congrats, it's not completely bad
First complaint is that it's too short. Part way through the background changes to black (where a red dot becomes a whirlpool of some sort), then later back to white, arbitrarily. Then it zooms into something which develops fire in its hand, which then goes away along with his hand.
It looked Almost decent, which means you have some animating skills, but it's too short, no story, doesn't make sense (even for an animation with no story) and the music wasn't very good. You probably don't need the stage to be so huge either. Most of the time you were using less than half of it.
Keep trying, you'll get there =)
indesisive responds:
Ha yea well the truth is, usually to an audience an animation is never long enough (mine was short tho) the animation-wasnt supposed to make sense. The music quality is actually alot better than regual beggining animations and maybe that just depends on ur taste of music. But yes i will use a smaller canvas next time.