Dude... preloader...
I know it's a little thing, but seriously - you can copy-paste one from the Newgrounds page. Even the worst of the worst usually have one. It's not too big a deal but... try to be considerate.
Anyways, I second that this is much too short. Pretty well done, all things considered. But I'm not sure it can really be rated as a movie with this kind of length. It's just a technical experiment, so I can't give you a great score. Sorry.