Neat
Another interesting project :)
I agree with the snare being out of place - but it would probably help a lot if you'd just decrease its volume a bit.
What I think you should do is just add more chaotic synthiness, have them counter each other in rhythm rather then melody. Use a pitch range of several octaves. Aim for insanity but keep the drums steady.
Just a suggestion, but it's a good one :)
4/5, but I've a feeling the complete version will get full score... notify me when it's done!