This could easily pass as hiphop and I can easily imagine some soulful R&B vocals laying over this.
Reviews for "Temperance"
This is a nice relief from all the upbeat, dance, DnB, and other music that is circulating around, however, there are some points to improve upon. The song could be more progressive, and it felt like the same theme the entire time. This isn't necessarily a bad thing, but improved tone quality could go a long way if you want to keep the listener engaged. That might not be your goal, and if that is so then if the song could flow more easily it would help achieve this goal. There is nothing inherently wrong with this song, in fact I quite enjoyed it. I hope to hear more from you in the future, and am simply giving this criticism so that you can make even better music. Great piece overall, and good luck.
-DarkMadness
Yumisekai responds:
Criticisms like yours are pretty much rare these days. I appreciate them.
Thank you man!
I skipped the first minute because it got really boring, but I stayed towards the end and I wanted to play that part again and again. This is good, but you could work on the repetitive beat in the start.
Electronica isn't dubstep.
However, I definately wouldn't skip if it came on, well done.