not bad
that was pretty dang good. it is a little short though
Reviews for "A Short Silent Movie"
music
without a preloader, the music blends with itself. weird.
Short, concise and entertaining
Nice idea to have a silent film in colour, the animation were pretty smooth and the characters were pretty well done (considering it's rayman-like). Negatives were the text were a bit too fast for me to read in the first try (maybe make them last 1-1.5 seconds longer?) and maybe install a replay button. Hope you make more of these kinds of movie in the future.
Bland.
And it's the whole basic "Damsel in Distress" kind of thing, original, but boring and not very entertaining, I'd suggest you add something else into the plot, such as the train coming too fast and it de-rails and hits him instead of the girl, or it starts raining potatoes or something else and knocks his ass out before he gets to the railroad track, maybe he falls on main street and a car hits her? Just a few idea.
Nice work
I really like the style and it looks like effort went into it, maybe slow the pace just a tad and make it longer with some more plot and you're onto a winner!