Great
-Good-
I thought this was very well done. The script was pretty funny and I liked how the hero was "critiquing" the villain. The background music was good and added to the movie. The graphics were well done and I liked the zooming effects that made it more interesting. The voice acting was great as well.
-Bad-
Not much to put here, very good.
-Overall-
Good job, I thought it was funny.
~Review Request Club
Glad you mentioned the background music, lol I originally didn't have it in there, but thought it was too quiet without it. Now I see that I made the right decision.
huh...
THERS NO NOSE
lol crazy
that was funny he talked the villain outta destroying the town basically but why does he look so average if he's a superhero lol
I'll explain that in the next episode.
It had something
This seems to be an 'ok' for a pilot. Personally, I thought it was pretty good. Although abit cliche, I'll give you a decent score. As for the animation, it was almost all tweened. Practically tween-rapped if you ask me. Tween tween tween. However, you DID use it effectively, and that gives tweening a good name. So congrats on that, the dialogue saves the rest.
I'm going to sound like an old people but, is it a little too much to ask for a little frame-by-frame now and then? I mean, it may not look as great as tweening AT FIRST but PRACTICE makes huge, and I mean huge, improvements. Frame-by-frame is also so much more vastly dynamic than tweening. And it looks more professional to show yourself trying something hard.
I'm rambling on like an old people aren't I? Sorry, wanted to get my point across. Hope the series goes well! Don't steal ideas, and make some kick-ass animation! :D
Yeah I really tweened the crap out of this sucker, and you're right I should do more FBF stuff, and I think Fizz is going to be a great series for me to practice FBF on, expect less tweens in episode 2 for sure!
dont judge
Puppy Cannon
Don't judge the puppy cannon, yo.