Not bad
That was quite a funny movie and it actually had a little bit of a story. keep up the good work man and keep improving!
Reviews for "The Barfight"
DaReaperZ responds:
Thanks a lot, I didn't expect any 10s and positive reviews!
Well
You can animate but you need more depth than a 2d stick fight and computer generated voices. Love your music choice. Keep it up
DaReaperZ responds:
Well, everything is going to be 2D probably, since I am not so good at this yet, also I do not know how to use Action script or 3D animation programs. Thanks for watching!
Cool
This was pretty good! The music was nice, it fitted the action and stuff. And I noticed you used those microsoft sound guys, lol. This was pretty good!
DaReaperZ responds:
Thank you for reviewing and voting!
I know it was short but I will make longer ones...
Anyway thanks for the positive review
Below average
I enjoyed the humor of this movie, especially when he closed the door on one of the random people. But some problems need to be addressed.
-- First off, they're stick people, and any stick flash I see can only reach a grade of average at best, yes I have a thing against stick people in flashes.
-- The sound quality needs to be fixed, I don't care how, if you need subtitles in a flash, fix your volume.
-- The fight was ok for stick people, I'm glad it wasn't overdone like so many other stick animations with stick people going into DBZ fight scenes, or making every random enemy a ninja that would have to train for years to get to their level.
-- You could have used weapons like a beer bottle or something to make it more realistic, but it's ok that you didn't it doesn't really matter.
-- When you use music, remember it can't be more than 30 seconds or 10% of the song, just thought I would bring that copyright fact up.
All considered, it's nothing new or special, but you can make a flash that is if you're bored enough. Try to stick to humor though, your action/ violence isn't what makes this flash interesting.
DaReaperZ responds:
Yeah, Thanks a lot for all the criticism!
I am still a newbie on flash so It'll have to be stick people for a while probably.
The sound quality hmm, I tried making it better but next time I will export in EVEN better so you can hear it a bit better.
The fight is a bit short, but I am no good at doing fighting scenes so next movie should be firearms instead of melee.
Didn't know that about the music :S Guess I cant use so big parts of it then.
Humor will be in the next one as well ;) only better
Not too shabby
You did really well on this and you should be proud,
But THere's still a lot you have left to master.
Like getting the latest version of Flash
DaReaperZ responds:
Thanks, yeah, latest version of flash is hard to get :P