Not getting much better
It lost credibility when she announced love for him after only one night. Then it got clichéd with the whole light/dark realm thing and the creepy girl being controlled by a voice. Now the script is getting significantly corny and I hope the last episode can make up for lost ground.
AWESOMELY SWEET
CAN YOU PLZ MAKE ANOTHER SEASON OF ASAROKI PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ!
Awesome sweet!
This is amazing! Its easy to see this as a big budget movie. Its awesome.
nicly done
this was well done tho
some of the scenes didn't betray enough force in there actions.
like for example at the beginning when the lady got her heart ripped out of chest. outside of facial expression her body barely portray any pain from it. she just slowly lean over like she was falling asleep. a example of how you could have made her body portray pain was to sharply sit up, have her heart brust,then rest back down dieing.
another one is when the main character got his wing ripped off
he was completely in place, not affected by his wing being togged off
he should of moved like someone getting there arm pulled on. the puller is pulling the guy right, the guy Resist by moving left. there a struggle. when the puller over whelm the guy with force the guy fall in the direction of where
the puller was pulling. when his wing got pulled off he should have fell in the direction he was pull to. that would have showed a strong force haved been used on the character.
minor mistakes aside
this was a well made episode
FING SWEET U GO GIRL
I LOVE IT ALL