Pretty Good
This is good for an amateur like yourself. The animation was pretty good whilst the jokes were alright. This is a decent effort so 7/10 for you. Keep it up
Reviews for "Super Mario Outtakes"
Not bad,but nothing special
I Thought the sounds were chosen well,but there was too many plain backgrounds,there was also lots of random scenes,that kind of got on my nerves,but what the hell.
It does show promise.
If this is indeed your first submission, I do see a lot of potential from you. As of right now however, you need to work on a few things. Randomness can be funny, but too much of it will pretty much leave a meh feeling towards it and thus ruining its impact on your flash. Another thing is that you need to put in a lot more work. The lack of a decent background pretty much dampers the experience. A little more effort would benefit you and your works in the long run. I think you can be a good author, you just need to step back and work on your potential submissions before actually uploading it dude.
You have the mind and the comedy for it. Thats important and thats really good. Im sure I will be hearing more from you soon.
One key issue
The animation was decent, the main issue I saw was how short it was even with four different clips it was like 30 seconds. a second thing I found was the stories tehmself, personaly I didn't think they were very funyy. But that's my view I'm sure you and others did find them funny.
Meh...
TBH, I didn't like it very much, I mean, there was a few quiet chuckles that peeked outta my mouth, but apart from that, I didn't think it was very good.
Maybe you could make the shapes a bit cleaner, or the animations a bit sharper
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