Pretty good...
Do you use a tablet? If not, go buy one. Otherwise, try your best ever at drawing with one. You'll get more reviews that way. Anyways, wonderful job. I like how you draw Mario. ;D
Reviews for "Mario VS Dimentio"
Mariofan9 responds:
I do have a tablet now, but didn't when I made this Flash movie. Thanks for your review.
uhhh I don't know what to think
the story was kinda going everywhere i think. but overall i think it wasn't horrible
Mariofan9 responds:
Hmm. Did you ever play Super Paper Mario?
Nice bit of effort put into this...
The effort you have put into this animation shows really well... The graphics and drawing skill in this animation really shows off the potential you have to develop some very good flash skills. Overall the animation was nice and clean, well drawn and well animated. The drawing could be a tiny bit more smoother, but I'm not too bothered about that. Even the top authors on this site have some rough edges in their animation.
The sound was very good, fitted perfectly with the animation, and very well synchronised.
I only have to slight bad points about this. First of all, the clicking for the speech boxes is very annoying for an animation. In your next animation, I would just time them for a few seconds. Next, the credits could be a bit more "all-singing, all-dancing", especially due to the Mario theme you have with this project.
Other than those points, you've put a very large amount of effort into this animation, and I believe it will pay off, and hopefully even more so in the sequels you will make.
Very Confusing...
The story just seemed out of place. Make sure you have more of a a story for the next one. Your drawings are nice especially for that square girl who I forget her name. Anywayz, good luck.
Mariofan9 responds:
The story is heavily based on Super Paper Mario. Of course you wouldn't understand if you haven't played that game.
But thanks.
Well....
Im not sure what the point is to the flash but its not that bad.
The content was dull but your flash skills are good.