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i tink the music went perfectly, it provided a nice background song, maybe not so loud next time though. The hand would just make it..well too human. lol it would be nice if it was just the floating pencil, and the more realistic pencil line idea? as long as it bold enough to make it plain to see. have you considered a a chalkamation? using chalk on a blackboard? The classic animation style is what most people of our generation are looking for, classic cartoons with classic cartoon violence. tom and jerry or looney toon style. So this is a perfect release for that. you should think about maybe showing this to cartoon network or boomerang and seeing if theytd like to commision you. Good luck and please keep up the good work