Nice shot !
As nefanator said before, the animation is simple, but not bad.
Furthermore, you avoided all the mistakes often made in a first submission : you did put a loader page, an end page with possibility of watching the movie again, and audio quality is really fine !
About humour, well it was perfect, i'm fond of the joke about louis grabbin' pills and trying to kiss the smokey ^^
Ho, and i hate lawyers too xD
I'll take a look on your further submissions, i enjoied this one, and hope it'll get the reward it deserved.
If a left for dead collection is created, i'll vote for it to go in !