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Heh, I thought this was pretty funny. At first I thought you doing all the voices, in what seemed to be a pretty impromptu fashion was going to bring this down, but I think you have talent in that aspect. Did you do this all in one audio recording or multiple ones? Of course, could have been longer, but I've already read that you hope to change that. Looking forward to another episode from you.
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Yeah, it was very spur of the moment lol. It was all in one take. I was limited by some things and thats how it came out. Next time will be better. Thanks!
Very very short dub
This turned out to be a little funny but in the future if you wish to submit more DUBs then please at least find a section that's a little longer and work on a script to go wit hit as well so it get's more humor, try to find parts that mix and match with the humor you are trying to aim at.
This was funny but more towards the middle of this short segment it just seemed to lose its humor overall. I look forward to seeing more DUBs from you.
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Next one will have a better script and more humor! I spent more time on this one trying to figure out what the hell I was doing lol. Thanks for the review and I am glad you enjoyed it.
A little short
I think if you're going to do dubbed movies that you need to get longer pieces and make the writing a lot better.
For me, the next logical step is to start taking these characters and trying to draw them yourself. It will take time, but gradually, you will be able to make a better Yu-Gi-Oh parody if it's something that's been drawn yourself, rather than poor quality video from other sources.
The voice acting was a little quiet and somewhat muffled. Perhaps adding another dimension to the project, by having voices that were vastly different to the original wasn't the way to go, who knows?
All in all, making a piece that is more your own work would be more beneficial to yourself and to the viewers. Increasing the length and possibly searching through lots of relevant fanfics to come up with some ideas will help your writing.
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I appreciate the review. It was in a way an experiment I was doing, and now I can work off of it. Especially with the help/ideas I get from reviews. Which was the main reason I requested help from the RRC. I am happy with the way it came out for the aspect of the steps I am taking to make my next project, and I think once that project comes out it will all come together. I am not trying to throw half assed crap on the portal, not saying you are calling it crap, but instead show a progression of work. Whether or not it will be a success is still up in the air, but I hope this will at least help explain this submission a little more. At any rate, I understand why you might not have enjoyed this movie, but I guess those are the same reasons some people did enjoy this movie.
Also I find the most important thing to do is to first and foremost create things that you enjoy. That's what I did here, and that's why I submitted it. For some strange reason this little experiment made me giggle, and I felt like sharing that, knowing that a lot of people might not exactly enjoy it =p. However this is not the standard I am setting myself too. This is merely a beginning. I hope that with some hard work and long hours/days the quality will improve greatly.
Look at me ranting for no particular reason. Thanks for the review!
Wow sorry I didn't like it that much. :(
And I do hate giving reviews like this. First off be careful submitting things like this. It's theft for taking a movie and putting your stuff over it. It use to be allowed, but then it was discontinued. Knox always use to submit voiced over things and then there was a whole law suit thing and everything, etc.. So lesson is be very careful when doing something like this. You could get in trouble with the law.
~ Animation/Graphics ~
I think it would have been better if you did this as your own work such as recreating the scenes with your own artwork and animations or simply by putting some animation over the movie clip so you could count it as your own work slightly.
~ Story/Content ~
A little funny, but I didn't enjoy it too much. I think that if it was a minute or two longer then there would have been room for more jokes and more humor. Perhaps then I would have liked it a bit more.
~ Audio ~
Decent voice acting and the voices were synced up decently with the mouths movements, which I understand can be hard to do.
~ Overall ~
Be careful submitting something like this. A well done dub over, but to me it wouldn't be something I would submit unless I added animation and made it a bit longer.
Sorry for the bad review. :( You always give me good ones, but since this came through the RRC I had to be as honest as I could.
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Thanks for your concern over this sir, it is appreciated. I will be careful, and I understand what you are saying. This was more or less a test of how to work with some ideas and I thought it was funny enough to post =p. I have another project in the works and I will read up on all possible legal issues and be sure to address them before hand. My future projects will be longer with more jokes and better range to show off my VA. I appreciate you being honest and thanks for the critical review because it will be helpful!
A Lot of promise!
I am going to keep my eye on you sir. I see a lot of good things coming from you very soon. This was short and could use alittle more, but it is a great start. Enjoyed it very much!
Glad you enjoyed! Just don't stalk me =p