Good, but..
I really like the backgrounds and the drawings, the music is cool...but you should add a PLAY button and some sound.
Reviews for "Two Ninja's in Sky"
cool
I like the style of it.
Most animations are 12 to 15 fps but if u use tweens it needs to be faster to give it a smoother look. Also set it to a higher frame rate before u start or everything will just speed up. U just need more practice its the only way to get better, keep doing it and youll notice. Keep at it.
It's pretty cool
Not a bad flash... the animation and song was good...
But technically they're not Ninjas. The way they're characterized they're more like Samurai. Also when the second one jumps I can tell you just tilted the animation. It could use some work but it's pretty cool. Nice job =)
not bad.
i feel like i don't hate it, it wasn't designed to appeal to me, but i kinda liked it. i gave it a fair vote because i think this feels like a free protect point, i think you're gonna make it through the harsh NG voting process, congratulations.
Needs serious improvement...
First off let me start with the positive aspects of your film:
- The background was really well done to a point I could call it professional.
- The editing of the film was very stylish, and well executed.
- Decent sound, I know sound is hard to do for films so I'm going to give you an extra point for that reason.
I do however have a plethora of issues with the film:
- The animation was really bad, I don't know what FPS you were using but it should have been 24, and it also seemed really choppy. You also used way too many tweens.
- The character design wasn't good, I mean the characters seemed out of proportion, & I don't feel they suited your film. But that may just be your style so I'll let it slide.
- No replay button, this is a serious no no in my books,
since it only takes a couple of minutes to do.
It's hard for me to wrap my head around how this took you two months to do,
even if it's your first submission it really shouldn't have taken that long!
I can see you really did try not to submit something crappy to the portal so I'm going to be kind and give you a 5, although I really think you deserve a 4.
You have potential, you just need to brush up your skills.
Sincerely,
- Celx
CoffeeBean responds:
Thanks for the review.
Yeah, two months IS ridiculous. First, I don't have Flash at home (nor the money to buy it); the school does. Second, the amount of time I had to do it during school was 50 minutes per class (yeah the school board decided on the absurd schedule in every class in the school)! That amounts for only 2 hours and 30 minutes per week! Minus a LOT of minutes on some interruptions, and the sacrifice of some classes due to formal assemblies, etc. In theory, I should have been done in max 2 weeks if it weren't for these interruptions.
And in your review, you gave me some advice. The first that, I guess, MUST remember, is the replay button. And 24 frames per second is the same for movies: I gotta remember that for my next project.
Anyways, thanks again for the review, that really helped me. I really appreciate it.