lol
lol wtf
Reviews for "The Flower and the Turd"
lololol
FAIL LOL!
keep truckin
for a short it was pretty good. a little too short for my tastes. good art style and animation. voice acting would have been hella-balls-to-the-walls-awesome tho.
good
good animation, colours and backgrounds, but you need audio and a better idea
Not bad.
~ Animation/Graphics ~
The animation and graphics were great all around! Really simple stuff, but really well done. Like in every case there is a small amount of room for improvement, but if you stayed at your skill level I wouldn't have any complaints ever about your animating skills.
~ Story/Content ~
A nice little funny submission. I hope that nobody needs that explained to them. :P Since it was such a short flash and was good as a short flash I can't really critique your submission here either. So far your doing pretty good.
~ Audio ~
This is where you have room for improvement. I don't know if you did the audio on purpose or if it messed up, but either way it didn't turn out well. You should have had the voices throughout the entire thing and the background noise should have also played during the whole thing. If you did that on purpose then I think you should do it a bit different next time and if you did it by accident I hope you can get it fixed!
~ Overall ~
I didn't find anything wrong with this submission except for the audio. Good job.
HugoTR responds:
Thank you for your review!
It's true that nobody should need to be explained, but I mentioned: "In the case you're little dummy" :D
So, about the audio, I admit that it's really crappy, I only picked up sounds on the web: I couldn't make voices cause WinVista's recorder only saves in *.wma, and, apparently, Flash does not support. If you know a good sound freeware, please tell me!