one thing
great for your first flash you learn how to flashes better when you make more 5/5 10/10
Reviews for "SC: The NotSo GreatEscape"
talking too slow
the only thing i think is bad is that you are talking too slow but everything else is fine i guess
hes talking slow because with the program he was using didnt let him lipsinc but he had to talk while watching the animation
Yusuf responds:
how do it know?
Not bad.
Considering it's your first newgrounds submission it's really not that bad. The voice acting needs work, but I applaud you for trying. Bad voice acting > Microsoft Sam. The animation and drawing definitely isn't the best but it's not the worst I've seen either. I also liked the use of play and pause buttons, they could come in useful.
All in all I have to say that for an early piece It's fairly good, and if you are actually 10 then you're pretty good for your age. I've seen far worse submissions from much older people.
Keep developing your skills, and I'd look forward to what you could do in the future. :)
Yusuf responds:
this is actully 2 month old lol i focus mo on youtube thans for the advice if you want to see the newer ones my youtube is http://www.youtube.com/cartoonwar also just to add they are in hi-def
woah...
your animations are much better now
Yusuf responds:
yup