PSYCHO
yeaaaah thats not my favourite movie but... yeah only thing i found fun is that the voice look like its a 3 years old kid playin with his toys...no offense
Reviews for "SC: The NotSo GreatEscape"
Yusuf responds:
lol wtf did you put the summary of the review as psycho?
nice to see 10 year olds can make submissisions
It seems as though you tried to slow down your vice in order to match the moth movements. The sound effects were just voices really and the voiceswere aweful. no music, no color, many submissionsmanage to pull something like that off well. but I'm afraid you didn't. suggesions, don't worry as much about the mout movements and try harder or the other things. instead of voicin out the sound effects, add some. music would help as well. the eyes often looked aweful and thier movements were akward. They didn't move tier legs when running and all that. To tell the truth I don't know how to animate so it isn't my placeto critisize but, I gotta say, it was pretty bad. sorry again. My keyboard isn't working properly either so forgive the mising letters. OK, i hope you ddn't put in a lot of effort, I'd hate for it to go to waste. Keep trying, and maybe try some characters instead of stick figures. But This is long enough, good luck animating.
Yusuf responds:
thanks for the advice im going to make their mouths faster from the 14th episode because most of the time when i try to upload another episode its too big but i have them all on my youtube in hi-def from the 4th : http://www.youtube.com/cartoonwar
bad
.:ups:.
nothing
.:downs:.
they talk slow
it's off sync
a little quiet
no color
no music
no background
no sound effects
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din't try to make your own sound effects, look for some online. also, look for some music. color the people and add a background. sync it up a little but and talk a little louder. next time, when you finish a flash, watch it first to see if there are any problems so you know if you need to fix anything.
not funny
pointless the jokes were bad and couldnt understand ur voice...its cool that ur 10 and u made this but it wasnt funny like at all...
Well, what can I say?
I'm not going to judge you because you are 10 years old, but seriously. You should not say that. 0-bombers tend to prey on people like you. In fact, you should not even be on Newgrounds.
Well, you could improve on the motions of the mouth. And the tongue. Seriously, it looks like there was a dagger or a knife inside of the mouth. More colours would be nice, and your motion. Well, the thing is I can see the teeth lines popping out of the face. And you tend to bounce things too much.
The voices was not that great, considering you are 10, and your uncracked voice.
I'm giving you a low review score but I'm giving you five. I hope that this might give you more confidence and you will have the spirit to do something better then this.
I am looking forward to your future IMPROVED flashes.