potential!
this was animated well in spots but, it looks like you cut corners and it was really slow at the beginning nothing was really happening until about halfway through. I also have to point out that the music cut out in the middle and it was quiet for a good chunk of the movie. I was really bored at this point. the storyline and message were well thought out. you just have to work on your presentation skills.
It meant nothing
This video had the potential to be more than eye candy. Go back and fix it, you are a better artist than this.
Unimpressed
Another submission that was good but not great. Animation was choppy, the art style was inconsistent, and the musical changes were irritating. The slow, childlike track was appropriate, but the whole epic-fantasy-metal track seemed gaudy and unwarranted. Sound effects would have suited the scary parts much better. Character design seemed lazy, especially in the case of the nightmare. You're mixing two forms of archetype with that monster; The unknown entity and the huge snarling beast, it was trite. The scenes changed too quickly with absolutely no transition between the music. The graveyard scene seemed thrown in. Finally, the message at the end was just plain stupid.
I think you're talented, but I do hope to see better work from you in the future.
if it seemed choppy it shouldn't, Try watching it in a lower quality and it would be smoother, everything would be more fluid. Thanks for the review