Applause!!
Very very good stuff!
What can I say? The animation was sweet, awesome choice of music and sound effects. A very solid flowing story that sustained throughout. Great comic relief.
The penciling animation was done very well. The drawing and erasing felt extremely smooth and well placed and well timed with the sound effects. A great work of art.
I had only one very tiny problem with this. I think halfway through the flash the sound effects and music got a little unbalanced. It's quite a bit to work with, having background music, penciling sound effects and character voices and character sound effects all going on at the same time. At sections I felt the background music was way too loud, and at times the sound effects were too loud. I think when the penciling was starting for the first time and not much was going on, you could maybe have a slight fade in the background music during the penciling sound effect. Just at the beginning to make it stand out a bit. And during the raining and lightning part, I felt the sound effect for the lightning got a little too loud. And the electric guitar sound clashing with the background music at full volume was a little awkward too.
If I could give a 9.5 I would. This certainly deserves an almost perfect score. Very neat and very well animated.