I am so confused...
I mean, how can you parody something you haven't even seen?
It's great (?) that you made the effort to make this but it seriously is not worth anything special on Newgrounds, especially not the front page.
The bad english and the way the mouths kept moving after the translation had completed as absolutely hilarious however, so that pretty much saved you from a zero.
Short: Improve art, improve voice acting and overall quality of humor :)