postive advise
look you have a lot of potential from what ive seen
i think u should use flash for animating the stick men
ps have a look at Black vrs white animation oh and the ghost battle thing
maybe check out stickpage anywho nice
OneGhost
Reviews for "Pivot the game(not real)"
not too great
.:ups:.
colorful
music's not too bad
.:downs:.
animation'd not that smooth
short
fast
no sound
not really for newgrounds
.:comments:.
pivot isn't really for newgrounds. it is at least colorful and has music, but it's short and fast. it's actually so fast, i couldn't really get into it. also, why did you say it was a game? i know it says not really but why at all?
Hirachi responds:
it wasnt a game it was a pivot animation that looked like a game
Uhhhh...
Your videos aren't really that good, I mean you have potential and all. You should stop submitting for a while and become better with flash and stuff if you like stick men aim your flashes towards that and build on it, don't just submit this mediocre stuff. Trying not to be so harsh here.
Hirachi responds:
true i didnt recently make this pivot i made it like a year ago and put the video on youtube and im way better know u just dont feelike posting new pivot. pivot isnt ball complicated like flash it is hard too there is a pivot community and we all have diffuculty lvls
needs alot of work
its ok, its colorful and u have lots of potential, but it simply isnt smooth, and does not have enough frames, if you had taken the time to do so, it would have been very good
Not great.
Truth be told, the animation was pretty good. The fights just weren't very good (except for the first part of the one with the yellow and black figures).