Not bad at all...
but it could use more options. Examples: big trampoline, catapult, oversized slingshot, ACME-esc flying machine, etc.
Reviews for "How Not to Climb a Cliff"
thumbsupguy responds:
Hey, thanks for the ideas. I'll have to put these into consideration.
HAHA
that was good
the Jet Pack and Balloons were classic
lol
Very nice
I loved the animation. I hope to see more of you in the future
IT WAS COOL
Very good for your first submission
Summary:
The animation was fluent and very good for your first submission but the idea is overdone and cliched. Normally this involves a lot of blood so I respect the fact that you tried to keep a different style of humor. I laughed a little bit on some parts but most of them are expected jokes. Despite it being a bit unoriginal the detail was refined, the animation was good, and you look like you have a lot in store for you in the future
Break-Down:
+Somewhat original in its department: +2
+Good animation: +5
+Good detail: +5
-Reused a cliched idea: -2
-The character was a bit bland: -1
Overall: 9/15= 3/5 | 6/10
~Da Bomb Productions~
Keep up the good work. I hope this helps you or at least make you think a little bit. I encourage you to keep animating. Though 6/10 may seem like a low score it's still a 3/5 which is good; better than I get.
thumbsupguy responds:
Thanks for the in-depth response. And yes, it did help me think a little bit. I wasn't sure what to do for this first animation, so I grabbed a cliche idea and a basic character to start with. My plan was to build my skills until it became easier to make more unique and independent animations.