alright
although you put alot of effort into this, there was so much more potential from an animation prespective, the characters are simple and should be easy to animate but i don't see you making much use of anticitations or any kind of easing. Have you read about of practiced the 12 principles of animation? i recon your flashes would just increase 10 fold if you had a play with some of those principles. I do really like your use of prespective, that and your story telling ability carries this film, and you put alot of effort into the animation and i bet you've learnt alot, but more squash and stretch, more anticipations, and lines of action, and flow of the over all animation could use alot more input =) still good work though. alot of potential there and i really hope you do really well =) def looking forward to seeing more from you in the furute =) goodluck