You cut too many corners
I think your biggest flaw is that you cut too many corners where animation was concerned, instead it just looked like a series of different pictures.
Also it had no real defining genre, it didn't have any action nor was it funny :(
yea i think it did look like a slideshow of pictures. i would definatly change lots of things if i were to do this again.
thank you for your review, its appreciated
Just some thoughts
Add more detail to your animating. Not the artwork but the actual animating, you need more frames. When the character is walking if you do not want to animate the legs at least animate the arms. A simple back and forth motion will do, you can even tween that. Also review your work before you submit and make sure the dimensions are correct, you don't want your work to by cut off by white void! Haha. My suggestion to you would to be to use movie clips more often. You could use them to give the fire on Ghost Rider's head life for example. Good luck on your future submissions!
thank you for the helpful freview. i really appreciate it
My summary;
A decent attempt: +2
Bad animation: -3
Acceptable voice act: +2
A couple of ok jokes: +2
many horrible 'jokes':-2
bad narrative techniques (text slides (NEVER USE!)):-4
result: -3, aka 0/10, 0/5.
sorry mate, didn't make the cut.
thanks for the review anyway, it will help towards my report