Nice
A bit on the pointless side, but the animations was great. Audio was decent, as well. The grammar, however, was quite lacking!
Reviews for "NG tales eps.01"
Very Interesting
Some lovely animation and audio here, and the scenario's a great one. Not the idea of a child being kicked out of his house to earn money, because that seems a little silly, but the idea of characters running rampant over Newgrounds/Rogueport. The lead character's cute, too.
One major MAJOR gripe is the grammar - specifically, sporadic capital letters and a lack of spaces after punctuation (text looks much tidier if there's a space after every full stop/comma/whatever). Hence the 7/4 as opposed to 9/5. Tighten this up and we could have the next major series to hit Newgrounds.
Foxpwned responds:
wow!thanks for the review!
I will try to fix those things,and re-upload the flash.
thanks a lot!
*votes review as helpful*
Cool...
That was a good flash'n'all but there wasn't really enough of 'Newgrounds' in there, just the odd reference to it until the end with the tankmen and p-bot, and yet that wasnt much, but I liked tankman's design, that was cool.
Yes, I instantly saw the paper mario in there, like starting in a house then starting some adventure.
The storyline to me was pretty plain and boring... a guy gets kicked out his house to earn money, and he starts fighting random people... Yeeeah...
The animation was pretty good, as are your other movies.
However I would not expect this to be anywere near good enough to get front page.
I hope the next episodes have more newgrounds reference and that they are altogether a whole lot better.
Good look in future... flash-ing
ehh its okay.
the drawings where pretty good though simple, either way i liked the style. but the animation was a bit lacking, i could see you where trying to reuse the same parts of the bodies , which is fine, but you've got to make a few more different drawings instead of just moving them.
the overall movies its self was good, just not great. it was still fun to watch however.