this is great
a definite improvement since the first one
good job
Reviews for "NG tales eps.01"
That was cool
The beginning made me think,"This should be a game." Anyway, the beginning also didn't go with what happened after. I guess I'm just going to have to wait until the next episode
This is better than the first
Don't get me wrong I liked the first one I just think this one is better. It's got a fun paper Mario style and I love it!
Foxpwned responds:
no problemo! ^_^
thanks for the review!
Cool...
That was a good flash'n'all but there wasn't really enough of 'Newgrounds' in there, just the odd reference to it until the end with the tankmen and p-bot, and yet that wasnt much, but I liked tankman's design, that was cool.
Yes, I instantly saw the paper mario in there, like starting in a house then starting some adventure.
The storyline to me was pretty plain and boring... a guy gets kicked out his house to earn money, and he starts fighting random people... Yeeeah...
The animation was pretty good, as are your other movies.
However I would not expect this to be anywere near good enough to get front page.
I hope the next episodes have more newgrounds reference and that they are altogether a whole lot better.
Good look in future... flash-ing
Very Interesting
Some lovely animation and audio here, and the scenario's a great one. Not the idea of a child being kicked out of his house to earn money, because that seems a little silly, but the idea of characters running rampant over Newgrounds/Rogueport. The lead character's cute, too.
One major MAJOR gripe is the grammar - specifically, sporadic capital letters and a lack of spaces after punctuation (text looks much tidier if there's a space after every full stop/comma/whatever). Hence the 7/4 as opposed to 9/5. Tighten this up and we could have the next major series to hit Newgrounds.
Foxpwned responds:
wow!thanks for the review!
I will try to fix those things,and re-upload the flash.
thanks a lot!
*votes review as helpful*