Needs to be better
It does need some improvement. Although you go tthe right shceme of things, needs to be funny and longer. I did like how you drew up sonic though. I could'nt really give you a 0 or 1 for this. So I gave you a 5. Hopefully the next one will be alot better then this one.
O.....M.....G..... it needs improving.... A LOT!!
there are many ways that you could improve this. by making it more funny and improving the way you draw him. i don't want to be mean but i think that you have a lot of potential and the one thing i can say to you is, on behalf of newgrounds, delete this submission and make a different one. make it better than this by making it longer too and adding more sonic characters into it. i can see you tried but i was expecting more from it. nice try. 1/10.
It was fucking hilarious
you need to have a bizarre mind to understand this shit,it Pretty pretty pretty bizarre and wird,dude.
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ok, the was weird. the only funny part was when he ate the bear.
Hm...
I'm sensing a lot of Homestar Runner, but I still lol'd.