pretty good
pretty good.. could be a little longer though
Reviews for "Make Snacks not War"
good but to short
y give a 10 if you make this flash longer : (
Liked it.
This was pretty good, I hope you win the competition. I agree with the below, the last line is over-used/not original.
That would obviously sell if..
..only that line wasn't so long and thoughtless, or "corny" (just like this pun, see?)
I would have liked to hear something more interesting from the monster, like:
"No good weapons.. Good snacks!!!" or something original like that.
Now that we've got that out of the way. This was almost perfect. Change that last line and you'll have a great shot at selling this thing to Doritos directly.
Nice animation
It was pretty fluid, and got a chuckle out of me. It was just another run of the mill commercial to me though.