So... second attempt at dubstep? unless I missed something between Paranoia and this. Anyways, really like the changes you've made, still innovating. The vocal additions are an especially nice touch, It's not really common, at least it's not well used. Skrillex uses vocals but I don't like the way they implement them. I think Klayplex uses vocals as well for melodic improvement but don't use it quite enough. However, here you've done a fantastic job finding that point in between both those style. You use what sounds like vocal additions for a melodic support as well as use lyrics in a way that fits the song well. Now as for the song itself, I may be wrong but I'd say you've picked up some stuff from some other authors. Now that's great and all because honestly it only sounds good. So remember how I pestered you about that weak drop in Paranoia? well you did a fantastic job fixing that up, easily identifiable drop, but not only that, it's messy. Now I don't know how much further you want to go with this but if you really want to create dubstep with some seriously BRUTAL and VICIOUS drops, check out Sinusoidal Depleneration by Duffany1. He does a fantastic drop in that song and if you're looking to make your songs even heavier than what you have now, I recommend taking a look at that song. If not, then no need. Either way, I really like and appreciate the work you're doing here, not only producing some nice music but also being innovative and changing some of the paradigms of dubstep. Keep up the good work! I hope to see more of your work soon