Potential
I'll start out saying: always give your flash an icon! Flash's without icons is most likely going to get a lower score than if it'd got one. Just a tip.
Anyway, interesting plot, decent art and animation and good voice-actors!
Your movie would have been much better, if it contained a bit more animation, than it does. Dig up some tutorials, and start practicing! You've got the potential!
Overall, a pretty interesting flash, keep it up!
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