hahahah wat!!!! wat a suprising twist very creaive loved every page of it!
Reviews for "A Bid For Freedom"
Wonderful.
My only real concern is how sketchy the art looked. Could have helped if it was inked. The book itself looked like it needed some depth. A flat square with a grey line for a spine just didn't look right and the background was just plain. Maybe a table top look in the background could have been more fitting. These three little details could have made this a lot more immersive.
Other than that this was great to listen and watch. The dialog was interesting and the voice acting and sounds were phenomenal. The story itself made me laugh cause it reminded me of a girl I know who one day had to have been eating some of those fruits. The youtube reference was a little out of left field and felt out of place but it didn't bother me much.
Overall this was a nice story to come across and I'll be looking forward to your submissions. Great job.
Enjoyable for sure
The art work is amazing, and the verbose astounding though there are times of inconsistency of the character's various levels of intoxication that seems to fluxuate to fit the humorous application, though seemed to capture the essence of women who perfer the more simian blokes (aka gold diggers).
AdamCook responds:
I'm glad that you've been able to see this as intended after all the initial technical issues, and I'm thrilled you enjoyed it!
Possibly everyone's in a real muck as to how drunk they are, but then a drunk is always more sober in their mind than their reality!
Thanks for viewing and for your kind words!
very nice
very nice story. well written, and the ending was surprising.
Very good story as well.
AdamCook responds:
Really glad you liked the story! I had great fun writing it and working with an excellent team to make it come alive!
Cheers for the kind review and your support!
It was rather entertaining
I liked it, except for the ending, that wasn't cool, she was a snooty bitch all along!!