crap
that was horrible it as like reading a book for 3 year old the wort thing was i watch the whole thing
Reviews for "PD Day"
EmDubya responds:
Well, it IS a children's story. Read the description next time.
Wow.
That was one of the longest flashes that I have seen, but I endured.
The story was a tad boring but interesting enough to keep me listening.
You have a very nice voice and should possibly consider going into the audiobook industry if you liked recording stuff like this. Yes, I will admit that the animation was a bit boring, but because of the low key pictures I'm going to assume you are somewhat new to using flash and doing animations. I still thought that the pictures were good though and helped tell the story. So thank you for including them. I will give your animation an 8/10
The way I score is that half of the entire score goes to story and sound for a max of 5/10
I gave your flash story/animation another two points for use images. (boosting to 7/10)
and I gave you an extra point for the EXTRA at the end. boosting it to 8/10
EmDubya responds:
The simplicity of the pictures comes from this being a school project with a deadline. In fact, the pictures were not even marked as part of the assignment, so mine ended up looking the best. I figured I'd put this up so people could 'read' the children's story I always tell them about.
And that was Shock0Dingo narrating, not I. He is amazing!
where is animation?
OK, this movie is boring. Reasons why is it boring: first there are no animations, just some pictures and texts, second movie is too long and story is not exactly interesting.
Bright side: synchronization is solid.
HOLY SNAP!
thats probably the longest flash ive ever seen
pretty good just make sure the text and the reading are the same, there are a few occasions when the reader would add a word or two.
(PS: I love the extra)
EmDubya responds:
Thanks!
Yra, I think I sent him a different version of the script :P