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Reviews for "Goku SSJ5 vs Mario"

A good start...

You got some potential but you got a lot of room for improvement. First off, it was way too simple. Two characters on a basic non-moving background. What you should try is this, multiple layers. Sure all sprites are 2-d, but with more layers and detail, you can easily add the illusion of that third deminsion. Also try to avoid the repetition. Try your best to make each action a different position. Know what I mean?

The sprite fighting division on NewGrounds is a rough place to gain fame with artists like Alvin-Earthworm and Proxicide dominating it with amazing visual effects. So I suggest first, try using sprites that are uncommon but flexible, so its not just another Mario, Sonic, Street Fighter, Mortal Kombat, etc etc etc. Also don't be afraid to invest in higher quality effects. A well placed effect can seperate a punch from a huge blow.

Surely I have only said things you already knew but I just wanted to make sure you know. Good luck on future endeavors and follow these simple rules to vacuum up everyones 10's and 5's.

zerovirus999 responds:

Well This reply is actually to all people who comment...
The repetetion is because of shortage in Mario sprites, thats why there was only the fire mario.
I tried a lot to search but could not find the required cape mario sprites.
Also i don't know much about action script so i sometimes mess up with the V cam.

I'm no expert but...

Here's the thing, the main thing that bothered me was when I was seeing below the ground when the camera was shaking. Also, as tip, see if you can get closer to the action by occasionally zooming in more on them.
If you are using action script 2 then I highly recommend making and using a v-cam. If you use it correctly, it can make your life a whole lot easier. (well, for me anyway)

Bottom line: This wasn't bad for a first flash

good start

things to improve
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1.the animation-mario last fire ball didnt have have to be a fire ball it could've been a blast and u need a better goku sprite(i dont know where to find one)
2.the odds-ssj5 goku could easly kich mario's ass so u might want to make an improved version were maer gose hyper or something.
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if this is your first vid. than good start but if you made more than just this than u might wannna take advice like this ok but if not than good start i guess

wow mario would be dead in a second. even ssj goku can beat him