pretty good
the logo took a long time to load but it was entertaining
Reviews for "Portal I : Original"
iBlackieChan responds:
Thanks, ill make a new less long logo when I get back from school tomarrow
Not bad...
Not too fond of sprite movies but it was alright.Really loved the beat though,thats what really kept me in my seat. :D
Alright
The music was great. Not really sure about the plotline - what was the scene with sonic and sonic+mario doing in there? Awkward storytelling; Lacked continuity. But the animation was decent.
second version vs first
there's a few things about this from the second version the change in music from the first was not better but i feel it was more out of place second the backgrounds of the first was much better the. When mario and sonic meet one another the drawing was about the same only slightly better, Music choices were also better in the matter as well the only major differences in the two Is A there is no large lag and doesn't make you lower the quailty of the vidoe that should of been made in the second version and B the second is longer by a few seconds. What should be done is....Drawing should be improved of course....Songs from the first may want to be reused.....And you need to go over what made this one not lag as badly as the other weither or not it was a shorter then this one or not. If you just made a second version of your first then you should of made it to where how the first one meets that with no lag the better choice of music and slightly better drawing not the other way around. At best this gets a 6/10 and a 3 out of 5 reason being cause of choices made and what I've just explained what was wrong from the first to second versions of this same moive or flash. And yes I did like this only improvements needs to be played for success and great reviews and rates
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When you made this, you read my comment i left on "monstrous turtles" didn't you? Because it seems to good to be true that they are both identical.