nice
very nice for your first submission. just add some sounds/music and perhaps colors. animation flows good.
Reviews for "Kirbys"
Not bad at all.
~ Animation/Graphics ~
Beautiful drawings! I was expecting this to be some sort of sprite animation, but you drew everything out frame by frame. It looked great and you should keep up the good work with the part of your flash because it looks like you would be great at drawing and animation a lot of stuff.
~ Story/Content ~
Just looked like a random piece showcasing your drawing skills, which is perfectly fine, but if you could make a flash animation with some sort of plot to it with these types of drawings I have no doubt that you would have a trophy winning submission. I would also add color to really add to the submission.
~ Audio ~
You need to add music to it. At least music. You should probably add in some sort of voice and/or sound effects. I think when you make a submission that has more of a story/plot or purpose behind it is when the audio is needed the most. Something to keep in mind for the future.
~ Overall ~
Good drawing skills. I hope to see you submit something in the future.