Stolen joke.
Not great, but this was a sketch for SNL, and the quality isn't great.
I'm sorry, but try for original jokes.
Reviews for "Dear Sister"
Not bad, not too great either
Neat idea for an SNL spoof. That being said it really felt like it dragged on way too long. I got that feeling because of how slow the animations were and you didn't animate the shots. Not all too entertaining but not a bad effort and keep it up. Not too sure how many people will know what your flash is referencing, and that could potentially hurt the scores for this. Good luck with everything else you make.
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I could forgive the poor quality of the animation and artwork if this had comedy value. But I just found it confusing
Sorry dude....try try again on that
three for animating smoothly
good parody but
bad graphics no sound just bad.
... Honestly?
Dude, it's pretty blatantly obvious that you didn't let your ideas develop. You alered them part way to make it seem better to yourself. It's like a baby in a womb. Don't touch it, it grows up to be a smart, attractive girl/boy. But if you punch it, feed it alcohol, and then throw it against a wall when it is born, It'll either become retarded or dead.
I liked the joke a bit, actually. it's a running joke, but it's slightly humorous. Not like LOL funny, but more like hehe funny.
I can't say anything good about the animation, though. The mixture of sprites and horribly drawn (even sometimes not even drawn) backgrounds and graphics just turns out to be an eyesore. And all the dialogue seems to fly by. If you blink, you miss about 3 sentences. Would it really hurt to have SOME voice acting? If there isn't, leave the sentences on the screen for longer than 5 frames please. And the story doesn't make any fucking sense what so ever. Like where the hell did they all get guns? And why the fuck is Batman there? Where the hell are they anyways?!?
Next time you make a flash, put thought into it. TONS of thought. Maybe your animation isn't perfect. You know how to use sprites!
HINT: A good flash movie takes about 2-5 weeks to make. Sit down, grab a cup of coffee, and get to work.