"Big hug..."
Ya know man, that was pretty good, but after reading the other reviews, I agree you need some music or at least SOME sound. You have music like "Fuck the World" by ICP or You've Got No Friends (You're Gay) by Anal Cunt. Also, not to sound like a nagging bitch, I think you should have had more creative ways of killing the little bitch. I' give some examples: Hang him upsidedown from a tree branch, saw off his limbs and beat him the death with his owm arms OR tie him up and
place him in a small empty room, then cut a deep gashon his arm and chest; after that put starving, rabid raccoon in the room and watch the humourous results OR keep feeding him deseased feces and he'll have a slow, nasty, death OR put him in a freezer for a while then suddenly toss the ho into hot boiling water OR ...well you get the idea.