my thoughts
that was mediocre. in the future, you might wanna make it so there is a chain of events occuring that is easy to follow w/ little thought. there were also some parts that were just not very smooth. this is not BAD though. just get some more practice in!
Alright, will do..
Thanks
Uhhh
Well, I cant rly give a proper review buuuuut: The animation wasnt that smooth (Nothing moved but the rain). The guns were cheap. STICK FIGURES?!? C'mon man, everybody does stick figures. It was waaaay too short, and was that s'pose to be blood?
I 5'd it anyways: I could see a REAL story comin from this. AND to give a chance for some proper reviews, cuz it seems that your actually tryin unlike some spammers.
Yeah, well I did warn that it's very cliche..
Anyways, I'm glad you took the time to review it either way.
Thanks
Not bad
This is not bad for your first flash. I mean there were some minor animation glitches but that was pretty much it as it comes to problems. Try to make the sequel a bit longer.
Will do, thanks!
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Pretty short, and honestly, not overly exciting, buuut if you actually extend on it, I guess it'll be alright. I'm not really into the stick animation to the fair though.
The reason I'm commenting is just to suggest that you tone down on the raindrops at the beginning. I usually don't have frame rate issues on my computer on pretty much any flash, but you had so many ripples going that I could see the frame rate drop severely. Sure, I -could- reduce the quality, but seems a shame to have to do so just for one small part of what may one day be a long movie.
Whatever you decide, good luck. Keep at it, and you'll get better, fo' sho'.
Thanks, I'll definitely take that into consideration on the next part of the series.
really nice...
but the animation and the graphics could be better.