ok i guess
since its your first i guess i really cant expect too much lol i beat the game in like 2 minutes tho! wtf is that? lol but ok i guess just needs ALOT of work. seems like it has potential though
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cool
a couple of glitches here and there but good you should put in some
enemies
Okay, here's what you need to do
For one, if you know the game is full of glitches, why release it? Finish the game before putting your stuff out there. You might be aware, but I noticed that I can keep flying upwards if I just hold up, and I even go right through the ceiling on stage 3. Also, why am I fading into the things I'm walking on? Why am I walking through them and not ON them? That's poor programming, friend. This is a shame, because the perspective this game gives me would have been nice in a decent platformer, making the stages seem bigger than they actually are, and encouraging exploration.
Come to think of it, WHY am I even helping this guy in the first place? Is there a story? No. Are there enemies to fight? No. Is there a time limit, or some kind of score? No. What's the point? Games just aren't entertaining if they don't provide the player with a clear goal; they just feel tedious. It also bugs me that up is jump, whereas there's pleanty of buttons to choose from. You're gonna get blammed again if you don't seriously polish up this platformer, just like I know you're going to get blammed for this version.
Meh, I liked the flying.
You could use the whole flying glitch and turn it into a game that requires careful timing of when to go up or down. But other than that, draw bigger corridors. I found it weird to go through something and have my head AND my legs vanish.
jackkyboy responds:
thanks, its supposed to be just standing on the level but for some reason it just phases through it, if you or anyone thinks they could help me that would be great.
Practice...
I'm giving you a 5/10 because I have been (may still be) where you are in flash game development. I am making one currently, and I have run into so many problems, and searched through so many tutorials, that my game keeps getting better and better. It's not the best yet, but that is what I'm striving for, and what I think you need to strive for if you want a better rating than 1.7...
You settled for half-ass, and in my opinion you should search around the net for some tutorials, (even here on newgrounds) they will surely help you, and most of them explain everything that is in the scripts. You have glitches out the wazoo in every "level", no enemies, and your character is halfway through the ground. That alone could be fixed if you saw even 1 tut.
I wish you luck in the future if you do decide to continue working on games.