It lacks a few things
Although I did love "I have been vanquished."
But the most important advice I could give is that if you're submitting to a large company you do have to watch out for "political correctness." Having a dorito with a huge sombrero and bandit gear wouldn't fly well with the company's image regardless of the chip flavor you're imitating.
But the animation was very smooth and I wish you luck in your competition.
'Wow thats pretty racist, but correct'-Hotrod awsome movie.
Hips and Hops
Errr i like the idea but it seems like its missing something.. like the animations could have been better man... and what are foot creatures doing?... wtf??.. Alsoo i like doritos so you could have made them more like doritos.. not just like big cheese.. :D u getting an 8/5
I really thought that the bulging man arms would be a dead give away that it was a dorito but I guess I was wrong.
Lol
But too short!
It's Good
It's good, with it's art style, animation flow and the fact that it was a cartoon. However, points were notched down from this flash because of the recording method used for the voice acting. It was quite obvious that it was recorded therefore doesn't mix well with the flash, particularly the Dorito whose voice was below average because of that recording sound that trailed his voice. Hunger was pretty stupid and lackluster, you might as well made him something larger, more intelligent and dangerous like how hunger really is. The additional flavor costumes were a nice touch, but the lack of a fighting scene killed the anticipation for something longer. Good ad, but unfortunately it's not all that good, but some improvement which I know you can do will help make this ad better. Considered making a flash series out of this instead of a mediocre commercial?
More Action?
It was a good flash, I was expecting a bit more action.
But anyway 7/10 good job