u know why i's so cold?
- u know why i's so cold?
- no, why?
- Cuz I pee there - hahahahaha!
Reviews for "Short - Cold Drink"
fluffkomix responds:
terrorist propaganda strikes again!
Meh...
It's funny and I dig the concept of "Short", however, it seem like you are using the description "Short" as a way to tell everyone not to complain over you being plain out lazy. Besides, the character drawings were rudimentary at best and the animation had a lot of flaws, lack of in betweens and overall lack of movement.
To my opinion, you just raped the concept of "short" modelling it into an abrebiation of "I'm too lazy". You should probably go on youtube and search for animation short and see what I'm talking about, because if the animation was at least better, it would be enjoyable, however, you didn't put any work at all in the animation or the overall concept.
fluffkomix responds:
yes i'm lazy. i never denied it, but this animation wasn't about me biting off more then i can chew and then chickening out, this animation was just a small joke i wanted to share.
i never planned on it being more then 5 seconds anyways. consider the extra second a bonus.
there were inbetweens in the first time he moved his arm, and i was gonna add a bunch in the second time but i liked how it looked. i wasn't being lazy at that time i just liked how it looked without inbetweens.
maybe to warn people i could call it short short?
A liked the ending a lot.
It may have been a little too short, though...
???
I would've never made the correlation between Terrorism and Cold Beverages.
I liked the animation; the characters had an original look about them.
The plot line was... missing; but it did keep me interested.
fluffkomix responds:
thats the main joke on the short. the fact that a lot of people blame almost everything bad on terrorism, so i decided to amp it up a bit.
even the most simple jokes can have a big backstory
Good.. but
In the first shot, the characters need to be higher so their eyes are on the top third of the stage.
Other that that it was pretty funny.
fluffkomix responds:
naw i liked where they were. didn't like them being too high, or it would've ruined my proportioning of the characters.
or forced me to draw feet (ugh)