hmmm
I Think you have the coolest drawing style ever. Extremely original, beautifully shaded backgrounds. But your story brings it down. You have serious talent, but maybe you need to team up with a writer, or just work on your ideas a bit more. This lacks story and depth. Which you may not have been going for, but it would have been the element that changes this from a forgetable 3.44 to a ground shaker.